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All Comments on 'A Reluctant Welcome To Sixville'

by temptanddestroy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Could have been better.

I think this story could have been better if his wife was left uninvolved in the sex action. It took away from the level of hotness of him betraying her. Keep going though. Great stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
What a stupid fucking story!

What a stupid fucking story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A waste of time and ink

And the purpose of this story was what? Take a course, read a book about writing. Weak dialogue, disjointed plot, poor cohesiveness, uneven speed and direction. C-

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Swerved not served

Well the first sentence was bad enough to find another story...

TrollTureTrollTureover 6 years ago
Where did THAT come from?

Ehhh, PISS FLAPS? Really? That's a bit of a slap in the face, no?

Otherwise an OK story if you like the husband-stealing, big-breasted slut stories. And I do.

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