All Comments on 'A Replacement for Susan Ch. 17'

This whole chapter was kinda disjointed.Is it time to end this story? If not? Where is it headed?

Two chapters after this one. Then I'll be taking a break to wait for inspiration.

I realize the use of Queens English, but there are a lot of missing or incorrect words that detract from an otherwise very hot series. Keep it up, and yeah take a break instead of creating fluff. We will appreciate it more that way. Thanks for sharing it!

Thanks rnebular for your constructive comments. I have to admit I was torn between shelving the series and seeing how far it would run. It was only the fairly high average scoring which kept me on a roll. I don't often get the writing bug these days and try as I might when I am in the zone, seeing every error is not easy and there is always the desire to write rather than edit when I feel like that.

With little or no feed back I'd also almost got the 'fuck it' stage. Two anonymous negative comments following one of the stories which is actually the highest scoring, almost made me delete the series. Luckily I received several private messages of encouragement which boosted my confidence and commitment.

Hopefully ch18 will restore the balance, after which there is one more which is another roundup chapter setting the scene for possible future episodes.