by CFBwriter
When this story started, I was intrigued by the 'couch' idea, but am sadly turned off by several key points. In your vision, only men seem to have a sex drive, where as women are basically just there to raise babies. The last bitter pill to swallow was when you said 'until death do us part' is soley a religious concept, which is utter trash. I am athiest myself, and have sworn those same vows to my husband.
If you are going to write about the future, you should perhaps catch up with this century first
Needless to say ... I didnt finish this story.
Agree with the other commenter that this vision of the future is bleak. But, guess what, the *present* of many men is bleak. We can't walk into a bar with some lipstick on, and have offers of free attention, entertainment, and sex.