All Comments on 'A Revealing Summer Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
You're Back!

Awesome! I'm loving this series. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great story

I love your stories,keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The Best

This is my favorite series on the site. Usually I just get tired of continuous stories, but this story stays fresh and the character changes over the course of the story at a rate which isn't unreasonable. Overall a fantastic series!

zraxepzraxepabout 11 years ago

cant wait for part 6!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Great series keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Will there be more?

I love this series and I don't want to be greedy, but when is the next one coming out?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
more??

no part six yet? :(

oldnimrodoldnimrodalmost 11 years ago
horny landscapers

the landscaping crew is wondering what happened to their favorite eye candy

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Great story, looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

its a shame the series appears to have stopped... would to love have seen a part 6

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
She'd know the size

This is a really good series. You're doing a great job of keeping the story fresh and avoiding repetition. One note: a girl would know what size her breasts are. I suggest you replace "C-or-D cup" with "large".

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
About the size

@Anonymous: Actually, most girls I've talked to use things like "C or D Cup" to describe their breasts. They rarely fall into a perfect size (and in this case are in between sizes). Plus, depending on where the bras come from, the sizes can vary (a C cup in a normal store is a D cup at Victorias secret, for example)

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