All Comments on 'A Rogue's Folly'

Think there are some good ideas but you need a editor. Felt like I was reading something from Google translate.

Story was ok. You didn't say what race she was. I get a feeling that you were focusing too hard on cumming to bother editing. Pick a tense and stick to it. Some is written in present tense and others in past.

One of the best stories I read here :-)

Comments are too harsh, maybe. I don't agree with them. It's definetly not something from Google Translate and had really nice details. I really liked it, keep it up! :-)

Points for writing an orc erotica involving a canon WoW character.