by Silenus636
I really enjoyed that! So nice to read a sex story without any power games being played...just pure sexual fun.
It's nicely written and a real story of people having fun in mutual consent and respect.
You kept changing the verb tense throughout the story. Since you say that this is a true story, it would be best to use past tense verbs throughout the story. The use of present tense verbs and past tense verbs in the same story (and, in some cases, the same paragraph or sentence) does get confusing to the reader. Otherwise, I liked this story.
Loved the story, easy to read, easy to identify with the characters and the fun they were having. Like your style of writing
loved it really,,tried to get the wife to explore but she wouldnt have it,,,monogamy is really boring and jealousy is a bitch!