by DMV_05
I absolutely love how this story is developing, I never want it to end!
This is shaping up to be a really good story; I hope it will be a longer rather than shorter please! You write really well, with clarity and direction - and the sex scenes are really hot! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Jules
I can't tell you how wonderful to read a tale that actually has a story line. That makes the sex scenes ever so much more interesting and exciting. The characters also sound like interesting people.