by DMV_05
two chapters of this story! It seems such a strong story & you write so well I wish each chapter was pages longer... The sex scenes are really HOT - makes me wish I had a Michael! He's shaping up to become a very complicated person it seems, & I am looking forward to seeing how you develop his character as well as what happened to make him to make him as he is now. (It is also a pleasure to read a story that has no spelling mistakes & is also grammatically correct.) More please!
5*. Jules