All Comments on 'A Rose for Cinderella'

Wonderfully written and I really want to see more of this story flourish into an unforgettable novel.

I would sell my kidney to see more of this story, it had everything and then some. 5* without question!

Please continue.....great work!!

Beautiful. More please.

Beautiful story, well written, and having found it on the story listing I'm now going to your listing to find out what others are there.

Lovely story - although the problems are just starting.

I deducted a star because they were full siblings. The genetic risk for full siblings is just too great; 25% to 50% depending on the number of recessive genes. A Czech study gave the risk at over 40%. And, whatever the risk, it would be a little higher s since their parents are first cousins.

I would have preferred they be first cousins. Unlike full siblings, there is very little genetic risk when first cousins have children. About 6% vs. about 4% if parents are not related.

@DWarnock. What was your point of deducting a star and spewing pointless statistics in a 'fantasy' story? All you've achieved is to identify yourself as a pleb. Congrats and kudos.

Five stars. I added one to make up for the rediculous monologue about incest and statistics. They are not full siblings because they are words on a page. Great words on a page IMO. Very nicely written.

Got one new story from both Scaramouche123 and Xarth. It just doesn't get better than that!!

Even though it was a little short, I found this delightful.

Thank you author!

@DWorncuck or whatever, seriously dude, what the fuck are you doing lecturing people on the perils of incest, here of all places? It's a story site buddy. Just a story. It also happens to be in the incest category.

You take weird to a not fun level.

What a beautiful yet very erotic story. I hope you will add a second chapter to esplain the scarf and the tiny box.

what a beautiful story. I too hope you plan to continue. will be hard to wait for more.

I appreciate the true love/romance story! You are off too a great start. I truly hope you choose to continue this great story!!

Beautiful story....5 stars plus.....

A lovely story, hopefully you will continue it for at least one more chapter.

...but considerably overwritten.

I know everything has to be repeated ad nauseam for us "dumb Americans", because we, (at large), don't really get subtlety, but, even so, this could easily have been trimmed by a good 600 - 800 words.

The scenes were fully but not overly built. Main character's were fleshed out very well. The story was orderly and well paced. The red scarf was a subtle, artful nod to a tradition from centuries ago. This could easily stand as-is, but nearly begs continuation. My first Scaramouche123 story. Certainly, not my last. Five stars. Deserves ten more.

Again, not a story filled with Sex but highly erotic just the same. Great story and I love your imagination.