by daddysthrobbingcock
Good but needs more. A back story or a plot besides just jumping into them in the bedroom. Think Papa and I on this site.
Or you could make a second chapter and continue the backstory there!
Consider this a request because personally, I found this scenario really hot.
Gosh, this is so intimate and sexy and perfect
Please write a novel and I promise I will Buy it
Your talent leaves me breathless!