All Comments on 'A Royal Love Ch. 02'

Well there ever be more?

Aww wtf

The tragedy of a story left unfinished is like a dagger to the heart. I suppose my own musings of a resolution must suffice. I felt the repeats were unnecessary but the writing and plot still kept me going it is a shame there isn't more.

Seems overly dramatized. Could be very good but so far, pfffffttttttt!

The supposed repeats are from the other point of view they do need some work but totally understandable. And How Rude Miss Molly leaving us hanging where is that next chapter. NOthing like pressure ....LOL well done

Where is part 3? This was posted in 2013 it is now 2018. You've left it on a cliff hanger. Do you plan on finishing the story?

to is not the same as too !

Please continue...

What happened!?!!?!??!?!?!!??!?!?!?!!

Please continue this series. I want to know what happens with Talia. If the princess loses both her father and the love of her life. It's sooooo good!! Continue pleeeeease!

What happens next ?

kindly finish this...

When r u writing part 3 of tge story. It needs finishing off

more, more, more, god i need more... it is mean to leave it like that.

Part three???

I'm going nuts this isn't fair I'm too deep in this story for you too just end it like this ITS INHUMANE

I read the first part thinking it was just a two page little story that i usually like to read but as i kept reading i thought to myself "how will this be concluded in 2 pages?" then i got to the first cliff hanger and immediately looked for a second part. once i found it i had to keep reading to find out what happened of everything but i was halted by yet another cliff hanger (this is why i say i am not mentally prepared for this story). I had no idea what i was getting myself into. this is an awesome story that has caused a little mental distress but hey all good stories do that! I.got sucked into their lives and it's killing me not known so please let the next chapter (conclusion or not) be as good or better than the previous ones).

First i fully believe that princess should be virgin and Talia take her virginity, she shouldnt have slept with the two women but only with Talia, also you shouldnt write for the man, the man shouldnt exist even princess tell him all these words! i didnt like that that fucking man saw her naked and she asked him to fuck her.. that was totally awful.. From the otherside it was good, i was waiting so mad for the next chapter and i just wish you dont late to write next.

I've just now come back to find a part two, and... nooooooo!

This story is great, but the cliffhangers are killing me. Please hurry with a conclusion?

No darn it! Don't do that! Little bit of happiness coming, no death dammit! I was broken up at the last story, broken up by the sad beginning of this, we need some happiness! :'(

sorry to say but this is confusing and there is character flaw with Cleo ?

Please don´t let the helicopter crash ... it would be so lame

Until the dude came into the picture, I just think it was a bit too much and doesn't go with the story. Also TOO and TO are two different words that you need to be careful with or else the flow of the story gets lots. Another thing take your time it seems rushed. It would have a better flow if you get an editor. Good luck.

Just to clarify my earlier comments , I really like this story and the characters . Want to move to this kingdom , LOL . But with a little assistance this story could be so much better . You have great potential . So please continue

if cleo loves thalia, she would not fuck that guy...i like your first work better..this is not a good one..like come on why the hell there is a guy..

LOVE THIS STORY!!! I sincerely hope you continue this series...I can't wait to find out what happens! Great work! :)

It good I love the story I can wait for the other part.. But you might want to re-read this some the ch. repeat it self ... And get little confuse at times

Okay I am confused . The princess finds out where her lover is and then she fucks the guard , after they both decide sex is not a good idea . When did her father get sick ? Some paragraphs repeat themselves . The story idea is good , but you really need an editor

Please continue with this. There will always be critics, just trust in your writing. Cant wait for the next chapter.