by mrsterygor
As the author, I must admit that you do make a valid point.
There are definitely a few missed opportunities.
Time constraints and the desire to complete a story unfortunately caused
me to limit my descriptions of the sexy and attractive cheerleaders
that were involved in this chapter of my series.
This chapter was already 20 pages long, and I was quite eager to post it and continue
the series for my readers.
This is my lengthiest erotic story to date so I am not accustomed to going further than 20 pages right now.
Perhaps, in the future, I can find a way to extend my stories and enhance the character descriptions while, at the same time, getting the stories out in a timely manner.
Thank you for the feedback and constructive criticism.
Always appreciated.