by D_Lynn
I am loving how quickly you submit chapters for us to read! Every day when I check the new stories list you always have a gem waiting for us! Thank you so much xoxo
I'm in love with this story already. I am so happy I finally have a new story to absorb and fully enjoy. I love your world already. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I love the world you have created, it's fascinating and well made.
You've done a great job.
I'll be following this story to it's end, it consumes me.
I would be screaming at where you left the story. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Ashira sure does assume quite a bit about Dolphus. Instead of talking to him she let Shala's petty plan run her off. If he just wanted someone to breed with, there are plenty of females in his flock. Why go through all the trouble to buy her if he just wanted to do that?
I know you just posted this one but it is hard to wait for chapters to a good story!
I'm absolutely loving this story! I've noticed a few minor grammar, spelling issues but nothing major and there's no detractment from the story. I can't wait to finish and I'm so glad I don't have to. :)