All Comments on 'A Second Visit from Saint Michael - A Halloween Story'

Well done sir. An enticing tale indeed. The subject matter may not be to everyones taste, but it is very well written and I enjoyed it. Full marks from me.

Very well done. Enjoyed it greatly. Perfect sequel.

A little lame. Not your usual style. But, as always, well written

Would I that it were but true.

Alas, but I have my doubts. Even so, though, I will keep the name of St. Michael in mind, just in case.

5*

Maybe too well written. More a moral story than a sexy thriller - but very enjoyable. Definitely worth 5*****

I have not read your first Halloween story, but this one is awesome. I enjoyed your build up of fear to the conclusion. I hope you will continue to work wonders with your imagination. It is a wonderful story, thank you! Keep writing

"As always," you have failed to disappoint.... I only have praise for your work.

Now comes the inevitable heel to the bits... I hate cliches.... They irk me... The english language "such as it is" ... Gratuitously "falls back on" the crutch of "coined phrases" and idioms...

"Can't be helped"

...HOWEVER... The term "The enemy of my enemy is my friend"... Welll... I correct you.. You are wrong. There are "more often than not" factors. ... More than just the "with me or against me" Ideology .

Example: (Im just going to over simplify...)

I will be party #1.

My enemy, party #2.

My enemy's enemy, party #3.

2. Is a pedofile... I HATE pedos..

3. Tortures and rapes animals... I have no love for them...

The fact that they are enemies of each other makes very little to no difference to me... I wish them both dead. Don't even care who dies first... But neither are my friend. Both must suffer...

But... That is really my own issue. .. I perhaps "over think things"... But... "At this point" originality is just another... "Lost cause..."

Yours, without harmful intent,

thedemonIx (kimijahn6@yahoo.com)

I am so glad I read the first part before this one.

It's the unkown that makes the journey exciting

Thanks