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All Comments on 'A Secret Fantasy'

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
Interesting look into the mind of the sub...

But. Dancing from past to present tense is very distracting. Choose one tense and stick with it. Do that in your next one and you'll earn a five, not the four this one got.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Waste of My Time

This doesn't even deserve one star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Just have to add:

In Real life, (as opposed to fantasy fiction) never ever use undiluted essential oils, they can leave extremely severe chemical burns that will take a long while to heal, and leave permanent damage.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
if imitation is the sincerest form of flattery

I don't believe O would be flattered.

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