All Comments on 'A Secret Revealed Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fuck yeah!

Awesome story! Kudos!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Five

5

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
5*

Hope he made a DVD and sent her a copy with a note "all the things you would't let me do" Enjoy.

gpetagpetaalmost 4 years ago

Best of hot erotic stories full of lust and very good writing.

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11almost 3 years ago
Almost perfect IMHO

I loved the set-up. Loved the main character's thoughts and feelings. I do wish his ex-wife and her new husband had denigrated MC in the privacy of their bedroom. "Your ex- was drooling tonight at school, staring at the bunnies". Maybe some unflattering remarks about his physique, or bedroom performance.

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