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All Comments on 'A Secret That Grew Ch. 01'

by ana2013

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good

I liked it, just that there is very little intro to the characters. Everything happened a little too fast. But overall it's a good first submission. Chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Another load of rubbish

Total crap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Far too rushed!

storytymestorytymeover 9 years ago
Want to read more...

Very good story. I hope you write more on this story and write other stories as well. Thank you for sharing.

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