All Comments on 'A Secretary Changed Ch. 09'

by subslutjenna

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
babble

I really could do without the authors comments at the beginning of each new chapter ! Not only are the comments meaningles, they are distracting and confusing to the overall integrity of the story, and to be honest - Amateurish !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Not very good

You seem not to understand that some people's gag reflex cannot be overcome. No matter the amount of practice, some people just choke. So if the stupid bitch forces the issue she's likely to end up with someone that chokes on the dildo and before it gets removed, vomits. With no place to go (the dildo is blocking the throat) the vomit goes into the lungs and that person drowns in their own vomit. Stupid story. Poorly conceived and badly written.

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