All Comments on 'A Seduction in Hawaii'

I liked it, but your definition of "seduction" isn't the same as mine. When a person "seduces" another person, it typically involves turning up the heat over a period of time. Breaking down resistances in some way. In this story though, she sees him wanking, tells him it's their secret, and leaves it at that. Then, while lying in bed, she says, essentially, "Come 'ere and screw me." Where's the slow seduction in that? This is more like "An Erotic Encounter in Hawaii" or "Losing My Virginity in Hawaii", but not really a "seduction."

My two cents.

that my pet cat fell asleep while reading it.

A very dull story! Concept is ok,but the execution......very poor.A rush job,not worthy of being published.

She should have took it in the ass.

I say a one page wonder, because I wonder if such authors can write more than one page.