All Comments on 'A Sexual Awakening'

and want more

You are one of the best using English, But for normal people to read that isnt great. I give you % stars, which is 99 % perfect. You have the makings for the best.

Love the way you started. I want to read more!

This is the 3rd story you have written that I have read. I will be careful with my comments because you have surprised me twice. At this time, character development is weak but plot/subplot is good. Resolving reasonable in favor of the author, I have rated this chapter 5 stars.