All Comments on 'A Sexual Debt Pt. 01'

by Abaddon89

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sm1982sm1982almost 6 years ago
Wow, what a fantastic start!

The build up had me ready to go to the next page only to discover there isn't one! Looking forward to the next chapter and what Tom and the protagonist end up doing (:

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 6 years ago
Need more

That was off to a great start, but you need to write more

You left us hanging, don't be a tease you got put out....lol

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