All Comments on 'A Sexual Twist Ch. 02'

good job. Can't wait to see how they resolve their long term feelings as well as what they will do with Ian

One of the better submissions I've read. I positively loved it. Please continue. I had a fantastic orgasm during each chapter.....many thanks.

well told story,,,nice slow build to an understanding of sorts,,,,,i hope there will be more later,,thank you!

Wow, what delightful descriptions you provide! I'm very stimulated by this last chapter even more than the first. I kept hoping it would include Ian catching them by chance orgasming in the back yard by each other and his sister in law's & his wife's admission of fooling him would come out. He sees he needs to take charge and decides how he wants these 2 ladies. Maybe he spanks them as part of the build up :). Oh please write another chapter. My saturated panties are proof!!!

She's made her choice. Ian is going to divorce her. She's cheating. All done.

Such a beautiful story and so believable. I only wish I had a friend like that that I could share my fantasy with

I found this story to be very well written and quite engaging. The author's dialog is impressive. It flows naturally and smoothly. Punctuation is flawless from my reading despite the complexities of the conversations. Very nicely done.

I have no problem with the same sex attraction between the two long term friends but I am troubled by the disrespect shown to the husband. He is portrayed as a fine man who deserved better than this. He was made an unwitting adulterer by the bed curtain deception and the wife has progressed to blatant infidelity in this chapter. He would have just cause to divorce her at this point.

These two women could not have kept their secret much longer. Chapter three likely would have detailed what happened when the husband returned the next day. If only it were here...

And now she is cheating on him. They play together, trick him, and he doesn't get to knowingly enjoy both?? That is pretty unfair.