by MsGinger77
Nicely done. It may be a story that has been told countless times, but it’s always nice to see it with new twists. Merry Christmas, Thanks & Good Luck in this contest.
We have to see how New Years goes for the 2 of them. If he's as Rich as it sounds and has Checked her out . He would know she wants to run a Buisness. So maybe sex and Buisness will Mix?
Thank you for pointing out my mistake, I will becareful from now on.
even though this story has been told countless times, it wasn't that bad. However you need to watch homophones. You know two words that sound the same but are spelled differently. At one point you wrote:
"Not a sole was traveling the road." This would make it the bottom of a shoe. I did understand that you meant one person but the proper word in this case is soul.