All Comments on 'A Sexy Dress Fitting'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow

I have read all the stories by you and they just keep getting better keep it up ..........and if I keep reading your work I am going to get wrist ache

luv it

uhctawuhctawalmost 14 years ago
hotter and hotter

looks like you could write a hot story on any subject

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
tempted

makes me want to try things I've only ever dreamed about...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice

You are a good writer.

Justy5Justy5over 13 years ago

Your profile stated that you joined this story to write. You accomplished your goal with this story. This story was very well written. The sex scenes were phenomenal. The way you described how Marcella did Jeni and the girl, how they did each other was so sensual and erotic. It made me throb with desire and I am straight. I will re-read the story today and capture that special feeling. Continue the good work. You are on my Favorites list.

MistressCarrieMistressCarrieover 12 years ago
Hurried

A wonderful story but in a couple of instances the story was rushed rather than taking its natural course. This happened especially at the end. It appears that you may have been in a rush to complete it or afraid it was getting to long.

Well just my thoughts and they don't really matter.

I do hope you start writing again, over all it was an excellent plot choice and well told.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story

Very well written...captivating......sensual....hot!!!!

spankmeaginspankmeaginalmost 6 years ago
Lovely, Poetry in motion

What an exquisite and erotic fitting!

Bottoms up

spankmeagin

AstropirateAstropirateabout 2 years ago

Brilliantly written. Every sentence was arousing.

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