by Tetriana
I have read all the stories by you and they just keep getting better keep it up ..........and if I keep reading your work I am going to get wrist ache
luv it
Your profile stated that you joined this story to write. You accomplished your goal with this story. This story was very well written. The sex scenes were phenomenal. The way you described how Marcella did Jeni and the girl, how they did each other was so sensual and erotic. It made me throb with desire and I am straight. I will re-read the story today and capture that special feeling. Continue the good work. You are on my Favorites list.
A wonderful story but in a couple of instances the story was rushed rather than taking its natural course. This happened especially at the end. It appears that you may have been in a rush to complete it or afraid it was getting to long.
Well just my thoughts and they don't really matter.
I do hope you start writing again, over all it was an excellent plot choice and well told.
What an exquisite and erotic fitting!
Bottoms up
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