All Comments on 'A Sexy Wet Fantasy'

Beautiful! Shower sex is so good.

the letters for names just took me out of the story. 'A' especially didn't help with lines like 'A knock on the door and ...'. If A in an article, it's fine ... but if it's the person, it should be knocked.

It seemed like a good story, even being so short, but my mind just refuses to deal with A and J.

Next write about a

I do not like that the characters are called A and J, it seems to dehumanise them a bit and ends up knocking me out of the idea that they are actually real people... well real as you get in a story. Other then that, a very well written story, if a bit short.

A and J? I thought I was bad with names..

Nice Story

A litle short but nice!

Aunt Helena