All Comments on 'A Shemale in New Orleans'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Get an editor!

G: You taste good baby. Did you have a good time?

M: Yes, I did. Thank you.

Writing dialogue like that is an insult to your readers. If you are too lazy to do it right (or learn to do it right), get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very nice the first time is always great. My first one was long 8 " but very thin. iser21 Read me

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