All Comments on 'A Shopping Trip'

Outstanding story, very well written.

This was very good

Another excellent story to go along with the rest of your library. Thank you for sharing with us.

Just the odd .......

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I have spent a lot of time waiting while wife chooses sexy clothes and this story captured the mood.

Very well written

I've wished for one of those dressing room moments. Great story!!

I've fucked in a changing room & your story brought the memories home!

Thanks

Great story and a very nice ending. My wife will love this story as it combines her two great passions...shopping and kinky sex!

m_storyman_x, if your wife is willing to have sex with you in a dressing room, I'll bet you can try asking for it more frequently than once a year (haha). Good story, well written.

This story would be complete if the daughter could have participated somewhere along the way! Then, again, you can always save that for the sequel you're going to write for this, otherwise, terrific story.

Ever hear of Role Play??

storyman

THIS is what you do so well. Please stay with it

Well written with a great twist. That is very rare on Literotica. Good job.

The woman saw you at JCPenney earlier, yet you later leave JCPenney to go to Macy's.

HaHaHaHa!! The lady from the changeing rooms was his wife! You didn't give the final clue, of course, until the end of the story when his wife laughed at the lipstick on his dick. It's so funny, because years ago my prim and proper wife took me to the store. She really confused me by acting like she didn't know me and eventually drew me into a changing room and fucked me - not too quietly - with customers in the rooms on each side of us. When we came out she turned to me and shook my hand saying, "Thank You sir for your assistance" and walked to the checkout ahead of me and not looking back. We didn't have a daughter then, yet. This was so funny.

Love the twist ending... didn't see that one coming!

One of the sexiest I have read. Good work!

Wow, just wow 😍

And here I was hoping they'd be able to meet up again!

I like the ending!

You tricked us with the comment about no sex for a year

Suckered right up to then end. Well done!

For Pete's sake: How tough is it to spell Penney's the same every time?

You're a good storyteller, but every time a reader has to allow for inconsistency it seems a little bit more like it wasn't worth the effort for you.

Lovely!

Good marriage story!

loved it

Outstanding!

;-) too fun......... nicely done........

Brilliant twist! Great story.

That was slick and a good twist.

Who are these people are they gene and Linda

Just a little strange that mother and daughter passed each other with no comment or stated recognition.

Hot, with a nice twist, but it seems weird that such a sexually adventurous couple hadn't had sex in a year?

"I was way too turned on by her exhibition and the lack of any sex for almost a year, that I stood and walked quickly the dozen or so steps to her dressing room door."

This just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of it, along with as others mentioned the daughter not noticing the mother? Did I miss where they were never out at the same time?

Nice but how haven’t they had sex in a year?

Fun role playing game. Keeping the spark alive.

Thank you.

Nice suspense with the ending a surprise twist.

(Oh Henry short story similar?)