All Comments on 'A Shower, Some Sweat, A Scratch'

There were parts of this that I liked. The pace was good. It was a little manic and that made it a fun ride. However, some images were silly and threatended the ride. For example, when you wrote that the soap bottle flew out of her...you almost lost me. I centainly didn't feel the need to reach into my panties, and I won't be pushing my bottle of Zest into my cunt anytime soon...but very descriptive and a very good effort. Thx!

Dirty girl doesn't cover it. Reminds me of a night at a luxury hotel I once had! Thanks for the memory recall!

Your style of writing is so varied, I've read a couple of your other stories...very hot stories girl!!! Keep up the fine work!