by EenViezeVent
I have to go with B once more on this one, the supply drop sound too good to be something of real value to the siblings.
I also have to take my hat off to you and the way you span the choice of the audience and the story progression into a unified whole that brought the siblings closer than ever yet opened a whole new world of possibilities for the story down the line. God I just can't get enough of it!
5* wha else!?
AGAIN A POSITIVE 5 STAR STORY. I'D GIVE YOU A 10 IF POSSIBLE. I'D GO WITH B THINKING IT WOULD GIVE THEM MORE TIME TO BOND AND DEPEND ON EACH OTHER MORE FOR THEIR SURVIVAL. WE ALREADY KNOW THE MYSTERIOUS OBSERVER IS WATCHING CLOSELY TO ENSURE THEIR ULTIMATE BONDING AND SURVIVAL! BY THE WAY THANKS FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!
First of all: great story , your character buildup and backstories are just right, hats off to You.
I’d opt for choice B, I think it gives an oportunity to let the sibblings discuss their feelings and compare their situation with their predecesors.
Either way, thank you for providing us with such a moving story.
Go for it. Go for the moonlight trek to claim the "supply drop." "A", definitely.
I go with A...
Ben will exert his manhood and survival will drive his decision. The diary is still there for him to read later. She wants to consummate the relationship.
A
They want to get off the island, and the only way to do that is to play the game.
Um...he was bitten by a snake during the day. I say B. I think the only way off of the island is to consumate the relationship anyway.
The choice should be A. By the way this is a awsome story. I work for a magazine company. I think you have real potential. Respond to this comment and I'll see if I can hook you up with my boss. This could be a best seller book. Think about this offer and then respond to my comment. You could be in the big leage.
You gotta pick A, what’s an adventure story without a little bit of danger.
I’m betting (A) is like, condoms or lube (maybe more food?) vs all the potential danger. I just don’t see either wanting to argue over going, as they just made up for the first time in a while.
Ben will choose to go, then Kaitlin reluctantly decides to follow, if only to watch his back.
In it they find a message from their parents saying that they approve of their relationship and couldn't be prouder of them. along with either condoms or birth control.
They have to do A. They have basically nothing, so anything useful would be far better than nothing. They are going to need to start hunting or foraging for food in a very real way fairly soon. Perhaps it with be something to fish with, or seeds for vegetables. Perhaps the contents would provide a clue as to how much longer they will remain on the island. As seeds would suggest a while.
Then again, it may be a sea chest full of Hollywood props and costumes and some basic film making equipment. Three hour tour....
Plus their captors/observers seem interested in their continued progress in their experiment so any concern of them harming them would be for more of a later date.
Although I am more curious to hear what potential information the diary holds. It would seem a wealth of information could be gleaned from it, and the experiences of their predecessors.
Good job by the way. Well written, with nice character development. I am looking forward to reading more.
Finding out what their hosts leave for them will win out. Besides the diary will be a work in along the way
Go with A. It's interesting to find out what is in the supply box. And she can take a couple of seconds to grab the diary and bring it along.
a because who knows what weather is coming and they are not ready to get off the island yet. I think Kaitlin get knocked up once they start fucking it would be cool
With this comment the voting has now ended, the results are as following:
51 votes for choice A
27 votes for choice B
I'm surprised! I thought people would go for B.
Thank you all again for voting and participating with the story, it's nice to see different outcomes with every new chapter!
They have not lead them wrong.
Love their expressions of love and tender affection.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Might be fun to see what they get and how it will impact the story!risd4j
Ok, the siblings have now told their true feelings and acted upon their intimate feelings and now must keep going !! Very good story / mystery !! They now are getting sexually bonded and soon will crave it. VG story, thank you !!
"A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 04:" - It's about time that Brother Benjamin takes off his "boy" pants and "dicks" his luscious Sister Kaitlin! If he had a hard-on, like mine has been during the previous chapters, he'd have his dick so deep in his sister's baby cocoon, her mouth would be so full of Ben's dick she'd be unable to talk for days! Get on with Ben "porking" his sibling lover. I'll read on, while "nursing" my hard-on, seeking consummation of these loving siblings!!