All Comments on 'A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 04'

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JBOATJBOATabout 6 years ago
Options

A. They should go by moonlight.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Do not risk it

B

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
A

Good story so far go with A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
B once more

I have to go with B once more on this one, the supply drop sound too good to be something of real value to the siblings.

I also have to take my hat off to you and the way you span the choice of the audience and the story progression into a unified whole that brought the siblings closer than ever yet opened a whole new world of possibilities for the story down the line. God I just can't get enough of it!

5* wha else!?

beau6beau6about 6 years ago
A

Either choice works, but, out of curiosity....let's go with A.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

A I want to know what is in the supply drop.

MhouserMhouserabout 6 years ago
Choices

As long as they are together and safe and in love.

Jdavis77Jdavis77about 6 years ago
What the hell

A Have them fight over it and then Ben sneaks out

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
In the supplies lies great goodies

choice A pls. Birth control and more

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
AS USUAL A GREAT STORY

AGAIN A POSITIVE 5 STAR STORY. I'D GIVE YOU A 10 IF POSSIBLE. I'D GO WITH B THINKING IT WOULD GIVE THEM MORE TIME TO BOND AND DEPEND ON EACH OTHER MORE FOR THEIR SURVIVAL. WE ALREADY KNOW THE MYSTERIOUS OBSERVER IS WATCHING CLOSELY TO ENSURE THEIR ULTIMATE BONDING AND SURVIVAL! BY THE WAY THANKS FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Hard decision but A

biphilmassbiphilmassabout 6 years ago
Like this story

A

Keep the story going

MrAnonStorytellerMrAnonStorytellerabout 6 years ago
B

First of all: great story , your character buildup and backstories are just right, hats off to You.

I’d opt for choice B, I think it gives an oportunity to let the sibblings discuss their feelings and compare their situation with their predecesors.

Either way, thank you for providing us with such a moving story.

Taf45377Taf45377about 6 years ago
Survival?

Go for it. Go for the moonlight trek to claim the "supply drop." "A", definitely.

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckabout 6 years ago
Hmmmm...

I say A.

Tough choice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Brilliant story

A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Thinking

A ..... There are properly condoms in there lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Go for A

A

SupportMain420SupportMain420about 6 years ago
A

I am for A as well! Loving the story so far! Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I go with A...

Ben will exert his manhood and survival will drive his decision. The diary is still there for him to read later. She wants to consummate the relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Gotta be...

A

They want to get off the island, and the only way to do that is to play the game.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
B

Um...he was bitten by a snake during the day. I say B. I think the only way off of the island is to consumate the relationship anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
B

Kaitlin wants to stay, you stay.

jaklanjaklanabout 6 years ago
B

Kaitlan is in charge, they'll stay !

TanhorsTanhorsabout 6 years ago
Vote

Have to go with B, it's what we would do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

i think they will pick A

Texas_WolfTexas_Wolfabout 6 years ago
Choice B

Another great chapter! Choice B

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Davidtheman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
choise b

i vote for b. and i want to see whats in the diary.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A of course

You know they have to go see what is in the box

silver766silver766about 6 years ago
A

You gotta pick A, what’s an adventure story without a little bit of danger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

A of course

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
B

I’m betting (A) is like, condoms or lube (maybe more food?) vs all the potential danger. I just don’t see either wanting to argue over going, as they just made up for the first time in a while.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I Pick A

Ben will choose to go, then Kaitlin reluctantly decides to follow, if only to watch his back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

In it they find a message from their parents saying that they approve of their relationship and couldn't be prouder of them. along with either condoms or birth control.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I pick

A

Mary_K_KinksterMary_K_Kinksterabout 6 years ago
A

They have to do A. They have basically nothing, so anything useful would be far better than nothing. They are going to need to start hunting or foraging for food in a very real way fairly soon. Perhaps it with be something to fish with, or seeds for vegetables. Perhaps the contents would provide a clue as to how much longer they will remain on the island. As seeds would suggest a while.

Then again, it may be a sea chest full of Hollywood props and costumes and some basic film making equipment. Three hour tour....

Plus their captors/observers seem interested in their continued progress in their experiment so any concern of them harming them would be for more of a later date.

Although I am more curious to hear what potential information the diary holds. It would seem a wealth of information could be gleaned from it, and the experiences of their predecessors.

Good job by the way. Well written, with nice character development. I am looking forward to reading more.

1D9O5M91D9O5M9about 6 years ago
B

Choice B is very interesting.

Trojan1967Trojan1967about 6 years ago
A

Finding out what their hosts leave for them will win out. Besides the diary will be a work in along the way

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

They should go there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Choices

A. They should go

CrazyNewAdventurerCrazyNewAdventurerabout 6 years ago
B

If Kaitlin gets pregnant... wouldn't that be better?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
a

Go with A. It's interesting to find out what is in the supply box. And she can take a couple of seconds to grab the diary and bring it along.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Go with A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

A for sure. Who gives a fuck about the diary

kdeville87kdeville87about 6 years ago
a

a because who knows what weather is coming and they are not ready to get off the island yet. I think Kaitlin get knocked up once they start fucking it would be cool

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

I agree with kdeville87's post...

EenViezeVentEenViezeVentabout 6 years agoAuthor
VOTING IS NOW ENDING

With this comment the voting has now ended, the results are as following:

51 votes for choice A

27 votes for choice B

I'm surprised! I thought people would go for B.

Thank you all again for voting and participating with the story, it's nice to see different outcomes with every new chapter!

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
AWESOME, choose A

They have not lead them wrong.

Love their expressions of love and tender affection.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Choose A

Might be fun to see what they get and how it will impact the story!risd4j

horny2doithorny2doitalmost 5 years ago

Ok, the siblings have now told their true feelings and acted upon their intimate feelings and now must keep going !! Very good story / mystery !! They now are getting sexually bonded and soon will crave it. VG story, thank you !!

Diecast1Diecast1over 1 year ago

It is a very nice story. I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Choice B

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg1236 months ago

"A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 04:" - It's about time that Brother Benjamin takes off his "boy" pants and "dicks" his luscious Sister Kaitlin! If he had a hard-on, like mine has been during the previous chapters, he'd have his dick so deep in his sister's baby cocoon, her mouth would be so full of Ben's dick she'd be unable to talk for days! Get on with Ben "porking" his sibling lover. I'll read on, while "nursing" my hard-on, seeking consummation of these loving siblings!!

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