All Comments on 'A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 05'

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bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg1236 months ago

"A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 05:" - Finally, the siblings, Younger Brother Benjamin and Older Sister Kaitlin, have come (cum) to bat and hit "home-runs" and very possibly are soon to be new parents!! Their benefactor on their "isolated" island? We know not, at this time...but, I'm sure everyone has made their best guess at this time. Even though the polling has ended some five (5) years ago, I'll make a guess they'll choose Option A.

p.s. I've read every posted comment up through this Chapter 05, about half of those, maybe more, is only the reader's polling selection, i.e., A, B, etc., and I've come to the conclusion that a great majority of those that did post additional words of comments, a great many of those Posters did not pass any of their English--the language of the USA--classes. It's amazing the numbers of readers that cannot pose a decent sentence, or even attempt correct word usage and spelling. Just an obvious, but glaring, observation; the vast majority were "Anonymous."

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Aw yeah, best part was when she revealed she hadn't slept with anyone else, too. That's so sweet and beautiful that they both saved themselves because they loved each other secretly for years. Melts my heart <3 I was secretly hoping that was indeed the case but realised it was unlikely. Thankfully I was pleasantly surprised. Good call on that!

Now I wonder if they're finally getting off the island to start their little family together. And tell mom and dad about their relationship. Actually, I'm going to guess that they're the ones behind the kidnapping, and it wouldn't surprise me if they're also brother and sister or something like that.

ScottishTexanScottishTexan10 months ago

The angry "punishment" sex scene was horrible. I skipped past most of it. 3/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Choice A

Diecast1Diecast1over 1 year ago

Loving the story. Waiting for the final chapter.

ShishimaiShishimaiover 1 year ago

I think I need to wash my sheets. I got so hot reading this that I finger fucked myself into nirvana.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Aaaaand it's gotten boring as hell, I mean it was very predictable from the start but now?

Now this story is just plain bad.

Too many "oh little brother" and "oh big sis"... pure cringe!

And then this unword "piss-slit", blagh.

I'm sorry dear author.

TsJesse_James83TsJesse_James83over 2 years ago

Great story! Both but definitely a

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
A

Great story!

octabrainoctabrainalmost 6 years ago
OMG!

What a marvellous story!

arrowglassarrowglassabout 6 years ago
A

so we can see whats next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
a

no doubt about it A

jamie772jamie772about 6 years ago

A. go to location and get peek who's behind d it perhaps their parents

EenViezeVentEenViezeVentabout 6 years agoAuthor
VOTING IS NOW ENDING

With this comment the voting has now ended, the results are as following:

A shitload for choice A, poor B only got 4 :')

Thank you all again for voting and participating with the story, it's nice to see different outcomes with every new chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Double A batteries

A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

A

I vote for them to go to the coordinates. but it doesn't take them off the island right away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Waiting for ch. 06:....

Waiting for chapter 6.....

BelphegorIncarnateBelphegorIncarnateabout 6 years ago
A it is then

It seems like option A is going to win by a couple thousand miles.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
B

Choice B

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Option A

A

A

A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

A!!!!!!!

Let’s see what they can get in to

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Ae1a5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I choose A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

Aaaaaaaaa...

lunchbox90lunchbox90about 6 years ago
A

I wanna see how deep this rabbit hole goes, so I pick A.

katranmankatranmanabout 6 years ago
A all the Way

My vote is for A.

CrazyNewAdventurerCrazyNewAdventurerabout 6 years ago
A

This is just too exciting. Lol. Choice A please

TanhorsTanhorsabout 6 years ago
Vote

We vote A. At this point it seems that the observer(s) don't want to hurt them so they might as well have a look see.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Gotta Be A

A keeps the story going; B pretty much ends it. So go with A. :)

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearabout 6 years ago
Let the journey continue

A is the choice. As much as they are enjoying the Island they miss their parents and will need help with the baby, not to mention that if/when they make it home it will give us more choices to make. I also want to see if my guess about the parents is correct.

Keep up the great work And Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
let's go

pls A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

They've come this far. It only makes sense to find out where this leads them. And great story especially with the voting to keep us involved.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

Vote for A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

A please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
tws

I vote for A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I vote option A

A great story please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Choice

Go with A

rmeyerhormeyerhoabout 6 years ago
A

I vote A but with a continued story of some sort.

FeyGranddad95FeyGranddad95about 6 years ago
More, Please!

I don't see A as meaning the end of the island. It could make their stay better or present them with an interesting choice. So, I vote A.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
My choice

I have to go with A

Mack1982Mack1982about 6 years ago
B

B I want more story because your an excellent writer!!

b0br0bb0br0babout 6 years ago
A

Need to get off the island for the baby

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A!

A!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Selection

A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A for adventure

Gotta go with A on this one, no point in giving up the directions now that they had a month for themselves.

1D9O5M91D9O5M9about 6 years ago
A

Not sure if I want see them off the island yet. I definitely want to at least one more adventure!

kyotie913kyotie913about 6 years ago
Please keep going

Choice A

Trojan1967Trojan1967about 6 years ago
A

Go to the location and maybe off the island

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A

The only reasonable choice (unless one thinks with his dick or her pussy) is to go and see just what the coordinates lead them to. Hopefully something worth while that brings them closer to going home.

5*

Texas_WolfTexas_Wolfabout 6 years ago
Another great chapter!

Choice A

lazyhornylazyhornyabout 6 years ago
whatever option that gets them off the island fastest

I would love if they got off the island and their experience being made public led to adult incest being legalized. so whatever option that brings about their island escape the fastest gets my vote.

larry74403larry74403about 6 years ago
I’ll pick B

I like fighting the system especially when I’m being pushed in a direction. Fight the power!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Option A of course.....

Love the story, thanks!!!

bimmusa02138bimmusa02138about 6 years ago
Great love story but A

They need to find a way home so A

5 stars also

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
AWESOME what a beautiful story Option A

Looking forward to loving ending.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Ky2030Ky2030about 6 years ago
A obvious choice

A. As much as watching them shag in the shack over and over. I think we need to see them do more elsewhere

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
Vote A

Best chapter yet but I sense more excitement to come

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Choice A

I agree with several others. Choice A bit keep the story going!

beau6beau6about 6 years ago
Obvious Choice

A is the obvious choice.......well, for me, anyway, ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Choice

A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Continue

A and continue the story. This is a wonderful piece of work, you NEED to contact someone to illustrate this story.

JohnCKJohnCKabout 6 years ago
Tough decision

But i am going to go with A, the more they learn about things the better. It could be a way out or a way to get a better view of where they are..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Interesting development

B

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
B

B just let them live in piece till they r found

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckabout 6 years ago
This is getting good!

A

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
My vote is...

A.

Btw,enjoying the story so far!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A, Maybe

I choose A because I think it's time the siblings find out where they are. But I want more loving between the two.

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