All Comments on 'A Simple Pizza Dare'

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arch3rarch3rabout 6 years ago
Excellent!

Excellent work! Write more stories!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More Indian haters

Making all Indian men look pathetic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Happy St. Pakistani Day, . . .

you Indian cuck. The pizza delivery man is getting one of his virgins early.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Does every author hate Indians?

I swear every story I read here that involves Indians makes them out to be complete and utter fools. This drivel was no exception. Awful attempt at story telling.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This was a fun story

Please excuse the idiot posting all the racist comments. He can’t help himself. That’s what happens when you have a micropenis and can’t get a real woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great Text

This is a good read, i am amused at the comments of haters as if it is not a story but there wife actually cuckolding them. i guess this is the reason for there outburst that they are themselves cuckolded.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hahaha at Bayernpeter1 (the resident troll)

It's funny how this fool thinks that by adding multiple exclamation points to his comments that it somehow makes his nonsense valid. All it does it make him seem like a 14 year old girl. I'll bet he dots his i's with little hearts when he uses the N word.

trandall9991trandall9991about 6 years ago
One star

First of all the wife knows she is married. Period. No ifs and or buts about it. She did it deliberately. I would just divorce the bitch or never touch her again. She'd get the fucking message. What a cunt, and to continue after she knew her husband was there. Fuck her, shes making her own adultery tape to use in the divorce. Since she has such a wonderful job, I wonder what they will think of a cheating whore wife. Not all countries are forgiving when it comes to adultery.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
aspd

Some folks forget this is fantasy, fiction and yet try to make it real-life. "I'd divirce the bitch," mr randall says. Sure, but your wife won't let you talk to an attorney will she, mr randall?

I never expected anything I read here to be "true confessions." That noted, fantasy and fiction, this is still a poor story, even for fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
It takes a small mind to get upset over fiction

A very small mind indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved it

Great please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Unfortunately

another shitty indian story has shown up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

when are you writing the next part of the exbitionist wife ??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please continue Exhibitionist Wife episode ... It has Hott Plot....

Continue Exhibitionist Wife of Forest officer..

danny_33usdanny_33usabout 6 years ago
looking foward to read the next part

but the next part will need to wait until I'm ready to cum agaian

IamManaliIamManalialmost 6 years ago
Not up to the level of your writing

I am a big fan of your writing but sorry to say that this story can't reach the level of your writing skill. I expect better than this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nice story

Please more & more write.i like every story of yours.keep writting.please write next part of exhibition wife story and fantasy full fill

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Outstanding

Very good please write more & more stories.i am big fan of you.plrase write another chepater of your previous story forest officers wife exhibit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Waiting

Your stories are nice and I am still waiting for next part of your old story. The story of cheating Indian wife whose husband was working in FRI dehradun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Please continue with indian wife with boss serious

Please continue indian wife with boss series and wife strays, payals submission

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I LIKE THIS STORY VERY MUCH, GAVE IT A 5 (4.8/5 = 96%)! THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN SEX FANTASY.

This story is about a husband who adores his wife. He has a strong voyeur side of which he is not aware as yet; it is still buried deep in the subconscious layers of his psyche. That is why he likes when other men ogle his wife.

The wife is a complex character. The wife has a strong wild side which includes exhibitionist tendencies. She believes she can always control her own actions in all circumstancies. However she succumbs to temptation... & loves it!

The characters in this story happen to be Indian, but similar situations are reality in all countries (USA, Australia, you name it...)

LAST BUT NOT LEAST, this is a FANTASY.

The best thing about fantasies is you can fuck your best buddy's wife in the fantasy world while she is sound asleep beside your buddy 15 miles away. Also you can fuck your best buddy's sex bomb wife without betraying your friend.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hi

Hi, this is Sonia. Nice story. Married women also have desires and fantasies. Just like men, women too have sexual desires. It is about time men understood that. I am a big fan of yours but I think your other stories have been better. You need to be more descriptive and dirty. No problems with being dirtier. Everyone likes slutty wives including their husbands.0

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I have u a 5- (4.6/5 = 92%)

My wife did have an on & off affair with her boss. & yes she had a meteoric carrier after the affair started.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Next part?

When are you posting an update?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Part 2

When it willl be posted?

FlirtyBratFlirtyBratover 5 years ago
A nice read..

Your story is a nice read. However, at some places it looked like it was a copy paste. One grammatical error and one spelling mistake.

shang40shang40over 5 years ago
Vow.

वेबकॅमवर बायकोला पिझ्झा होताना पाहणे हा अनुभव मस्त आहे.

चेकाळलेली बायको दुसऱ्या पुरुषाकडून झवून घेत आहे.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchabout 5 years ago
You all should be glad you have Sikhs

20 Million out of 1.4 Billion making sure.there are functional 'nads in the country. Too bad for y'all there mostly in Punjab.

Course most regular Indian dudes I have known are not cucky victim types either.

Imagine that, inaccurate cultural representation from lousy authors. Who knew? How do you say, "I'm starting shit" in Punjabi?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

pls update next part

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Post next part

PimpofwifePimpofwifeabout 4 years ago
too easy

unrealistic . nothing like your previous hot stories.

must continue old ones with Langa the gardner n Mr Singh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Too easy

She goes from loyal, chaste wife seemingly never entertaining such thoughts to hot slut cheat like turning a switch. I don't think so, unless she was ready all the time and only needed an excuse,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please continue this story line and also fantasy fulfilled series. Please sir

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Thanks for taking my request and using the names Kunal & Neha… you helped me live my fantasy … lots of love …

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

What a bunch of hyenas, both the characters , and the fans of this story.

cdman55cdman557 months ago

Beautiful erotic story. Well done.

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Anonymous flings always exited me and I always wanted to write about extramarital affairs. There is always a part of me in female characters I write about. The stories I submit is part my imagination and part the real incidents happened in life. I am easy going and can be e...