All Comments on 'A Sissy is Forged'

Ah come on, you're going to just leave us hanging? Want to read about him getting the real thing and some breasts!

Yess! Omg i love this story please dont stop!! You have a great writing style!!!! Seriously your a great writer! I can't wait to see where things go with this sissy!!! And i already have a prediction about the dildo at the end ;)

This may be your first story but it's brilliant & I think that the fun you had writing it shines through. I could only find one fault (& it's really pedantic - sorry)...I think you meant Cheshire Cat, I'm probably not the only sissy who has a love of Alice in Wonderland. I've no idea how many words there are over these three pages but I certainly wanted more, I hope chapter two is already in the works & your having just as much fun writing that x

Good story overall. The ending was a bit abrupt, and there were a couple minor issues with awkward sentences and flow, but very good for a first time!

For some reason it didn't copy all the way!! I didn't notice until now! I'll make chapter 2 worth the wait!!!

...if I were the main character, the story line wouldn't've progressed passed his girlfriend's admission of cheating with John.

lovely story hope you write more

Please