All Comments on 'A Sissy's Journey Ch. 01'

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kuk4yookuk4yooabout 7 years ago
Welcome back.

Looking forward to more.

Well written. Sweet Endearing Friendship. Discovery, Learning, Love.

Lovely.

Thank You.

KantariiKantariiabout 7 years ago

Stopping in to let you know I read your story😎🌹Thanks for posting🌹🌹🌹

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
Great beginning!

Very well written, described, and told. Loved he exposition and development. I can't wait to read more.

xoxo,

Di

RetifistRetifistalmost 7 years ago
Very sensual

I can very much relate to Jesse. This is very well written and I can't wait to read more!!

ElectricBlueElectricBlueover 6 years ago

there's an Amanda in my writing world, and as I read this I kept picturing her - yes, I could see her enyoing that. There's s Jesse too, but I'll let him be the judge there... :)

Jenna2641Jenna2641over 6 years ago
Great Description, Love your Style

A very exciting opening story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love your use of description. I found the jump to femdom interesting & exciting, but the feeling of humiliation off putting. I know that is often a common element in crossdressing stories & for those that enjoy it, they are welcome do it. Still, they way you explored the feelings was well written. I look forward to future chapters.

dacoach44dacoach44over 6 years ago
Very erotic!

So well put, flipped to being the sissy bottom! This is exciting; and cant wait to find time to keep reading. I bet she makes him a total gay bottom sissy faggot, and he will love it! I am wondering if she is gonna use her cute young ass to find him cock.

JSF79JSF79about 6 years ago
Awwesome!

What a fabulous story, so arousing with such well formed characters. Beautifully written, I can't wait to see how this pans out!

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 5 years ago
great 1st chapter

I loved this start to what I hope will be a wonderful story. It reminds me of the 1st time I went to my Mistress - diff was that I could keep up my erection but I was not allowed to fuck her. The rest of the story was similar -- she ordered me to strip naked, she finger-fucked me, I shot my cum in the glass that she put in front of my cock, I then ate my cum while she finger-fucked me again, and then I ate her cunt and licked her ass until she allowed me to stop. I'm her sissy submissive obedient bitch -- AND I LOVE IT !!!! I can't wait to read the next chapters of your story.

AlexBaileyAlexBaileyover 4 years ago
Great first chapter!

I'm definitely going to read more of your works! Jesse and Amanda have a palpable chemistry. The words of your descriptions morph seemlessly into pictures in my mind.

As a recently-out non-binary I dearly relate to the passage below:

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"I'm not so sure I've figured anything out. I just have feelings and desires I don't think regular guys have." As the words left is lips, Jesse felt a new lightness and unconsciously exhaled a deep sigh of relief. This new honesty had ushered in an unusual calmness. He reached and gently took Amanda's hand and smiled.

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Thanks!

yukonnightsyukonnightsover 4 years agoAuthor
A Big Thanks To All

Looks like I need to post a big ole Thank You to everyone who took the time to offer their comments. I'd like to say; I really do write these stories to try to show that non-hetero and non-binary people really are just regular folks with the same needs and desires most humans have. I love your comments that speak of how much such stories mean to some of you. Well, you mean a lot to me too — so thank you and my best wishes to you all ~ yukonnights

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Unique story

I have just read this first part but I liked it! This is a sexual encounter I Enjoyed getting to peer into. I actually teamed up on the parts where you talked about him feeling shame. And at first when they were both doubting each other, that is so fucking relatable! Made me sad when I think of people who can’t be who they are, even with the people they love. I can’t wait to see where this story goes. I used to think I was maybe-sorta-fairly knowledgeable while not experienced in sexual fetishes and fantasies but after about 3 days of reading erotic fiction, clearly I am not! That’s exciting for me though!! 🍒

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 3 years ago

Excellent story-telling. While it might have been a single story, I'm glad to see you've extended the tale into a series.

I really enjoy when authors let us into characters' thoughts & feelings. The way they practically stumbled upon this serendipitous discovery was both realistic and idyllic.

SomaSlaveSomaSlaveover 1 year ago

I think Jesse and Amanda will become two of my favorite lovers, not conforming to anyone's stereotypes, simply accepting each other for who they are and meshing together gloriously.

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a true romantic who believes; that love is more powerful than hate...that kindness is stronger than cruelty...that sex fueled by true love is better than sex fueled by lust alone...that there is good in all people, it's just hard sometimes to find... edit 12-2013) It's been...

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