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Click hereIt seemed to somehow fall into the pattern she'd already identified that her aversion to contact applied less to sexual organs. Anyway, as far as Lucy was concerned, any breakthrough that let her feel comfortable with physical contact with another person was worth exploring.
And so, she found herself during the night reaching out for Matt's manhood; often finding it already hard and elongated and ready for her hand to wrap around it, sometimes enjoying the sensation of it growing in her palm.
There were times as Matt turned to his other side during the night she'd find herself losing contact with it. But when she'd noticed he'd rolled back, her extended arm would find it once again.
As for the hand on her breast, Matt's contact with it wasn't as consistent as she might have liked. It felt nice when he reached out for it and seemed to induce erotic dreams when she was asleep. But it was very intermittent.
Maybe, she thought, one day, they would be able to cuddle up together and she could actually enjoy it. She knew she had to keep working on it.
- COMMENTS
tjlee6 days agoI'm outta here. You use 3 or 4 plot devices/key phrases and simply repeat them every few pages. The "spectrum", the "oxytocin", and the "g spot" can be viable only once or twice, after that it's just filler. Plot development is made of multiple layers of narrative, character awareness and direction, and circumstances that change the protagonists'
mindset.
Reminding the reader about these three particular plot devices every 3 or 4 pages leads to a not-too-stellar opinion of the writer.
But I'm a sea Captain, what do I know? Bets of luck to you!
Mafen10 months agoYou frustrate me. It’s obvious you can write and I’m loving the story. However, once again it is littered with silly schoolchild errors. Mistakes like “not too tight, not too lose” or “his first view was off her legs” are beneath your talent.
I know you know the difference between ’lose’ and ‘loose’ because you get it correct later (but mess up by using ‘peak’ instead of ‘peek’.)
“The loose stretched weave of the dress let him peak through it”
I’m not sure you know what oxytocin is either. It is a hormone present in the neurohypophysis of mammals which stimulates uterine contractions and the ejection of milk from a lactating breast and is made synthetically for use in inducing labour and controlling bleeding after delivery. None of these apply in this story – no one is pregnant, giving birth or lactating.
All these problems can be easily fixed. Get an editor.
And learn how to spell ‘restaurant’!
