All Comments on 'A Sister's Salvation'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Romance and beauty

A very romantic and beautiful story. I hope that you will continue. I really would like to read how things work out for them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
why

if she was married then she shouldn't have the same last name as him. and having been seperated so long no one there would know her so they could have got married. SO WHY DID YOU GIVE HER THE SAME LAST NAME AS HIM????? such an idiot please think before writing women do not change thier names back to thier maiden names that fast keep it somewhat realistic please

DBRS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
@DBRS

Moron! I've known a couple women that couldn't change their name back fast enough, even after a lengthy marriage. So stop being a stupid, no-nothing twerp.

Can you read _any_ story without leaving a comment that shows you off as an uneducated, small-town rube? Go back to Rednecks-R-Us.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 13 years ago
Very well done

A well written and sexy story. A good storyline and the story characters seemed as if they were real. Very believable.

Thanks for the nice story

eodomeodomabout 13 years ago
Entertaining

Good story line, well developed characters and a good tag to the next chapter. When can we expect the follow up about the trip to London. BTW, if you are planning to have some serious backlash to his career when the world finds out he's sleeping with his sister, remember it was in England where Jerry Lee Lewis was outed for being married to his 14 year old cousin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good Story

I thought it was a well written story and leaves potential for follow up stories. I hope you will continue with this one.

juanviejojuanviejoabout 13 years ago
I loved it!

Beautiful bro/sis incest tale and well worth the Five Stars I gave it.

oldwayneoldwayneover 12 years ago
Juan loved it and so do I!

Great story!

luckylapperluckylapperabout 10 years ago
need more

great story need another chapter please

sabra16023sabra16023about 10 years ago
Need sequel

What happens in London????

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