All Comments on 'A Slave Girl is Bought Ch. 02'

by Hushgirl90

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Mymantoy999Mymantoy999over 7 years ago
Okay, you lost me on this one

As a Leatherman for over 30 years, I know MANY slaves that have a hard time with a crop. To bring out the crop first thing would be a sure way to make a future slave run for the hills. Most I have met over the years had to work up to a crop.

I hate to get on the "wrong category" bandwagon, but this one really did not belong in the Lesbian category.

Ed

NigraNigraabout 7 years ago
Be patient

We haven't seen even a full day yet. Be patient, people. For now I like the story, Catherine seems nice, Tori and Abby too. We don't know what's in store for them, so all this talk about the category is useless. Who knows, maybe the whole BDSM thing is just a sexy background for a lesbian romance and we're just making fools of ourselves whining about it. It's happened before.

That said, I'd prefer to have longer chapters. Reading the two available right now took me too little time.

To the one who said a crop is not something that he'd use on a first timer, it all depends on how much force you put behind it. It looks like Catherine is using only enough force to make a satisfying smacking sound on Abby's flesh, and nothing more. Sometimes it's more about how it looks to the submissive than what it really is. When unspecified, I like to imagine every action is well measured.

SmithieSubSmithieSubabout 7 years ago
it's cute!

I'm loving your story so far, and excited to see how it continues!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loving it. Want to read more. Catherine is breaking the slave slowly and gently. There is strictness but also caring developing in the story. I sincerely hope the author continues this most promising start

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