All Comments on 'A Slave Story Pt. 02'

You're a good writer, but I'm lost here. Our lovely lady and her husband are captured, she's forced to have a few orgasms (me next please!!!!) and this makes her submit? ...seriously???? Then she gets to ask questions and doesn't ask why us, where is my husband, are you going to whore me out,etc? Lastly, he can damage her vocal chords but why bother. She can still communicate. She can write a note, send an email, shoot the police a text! All this and yet I'm still gonna keep reading cause you've got some good writing skills lovely star! Just keep an eye out for making things a bit more down to earth/realistic. ❤️

Great story your an awesome writer but tit doesn't make sense why didn't she ask where she was who he was where was her husband and questions like that. Also just a few orgasms and boom she submits that is unrealistic. Gonna read more!

Not highly impressed. I know it's fiction but if someone abducted me & my husband in the middle of the night and locked us in cells after drugging us, I'd have 10,000?s that no amount if forced orgasams could stop. To rushed, unrealistic and slapped together. You need to think of making your readers happy.

If this is your first attempt, please keep going. This was great. I totally loved it. Can't wait to read more of your stories.