All Comments on 'A Slave's Afternoon'

I'm sure it is many slave's dearest fantasy. This is not the fantasy or relationship or even one time scene I would want. The overlying harshness throughout is unappealing to me. The only other mark to my body would be the redness from the front door hitting me on the ass as I left. Perhaps it is at least partly the intensity difference between slave and sub. Please keep writing and posting. I'm sure many others will love this story and perhaps I will love your next one.

I am so turned on reading this that my body is covered in goosebumps as thrills of pleasure wash over me! Thank you!

C.Sub.

Looking forward to more. :)