All Comments on 'A Slave's Love'

You had me with the first paragraph.

Then it got better...

...and kept getting better.

you have done an excellent job of capturing the two sides of the M/s relationship, the dominant part characterized by service and giving and the loving caring part, capturing the love and care that a Master must have in order for there to be a long lasting true M/s relationship. Very well done

the most wooden bdsm story I've ever read. Have you heard of dialogue? That's what makes your characters real, brings them to life. Try it next time.

This is the first story I have ever written. I am new to the site, though I have been in the lifestyle for a bit. Your comments made my day and I appreciate your thoughtful words more than you will ever know.

To Anonymous whom didn't like my story,

My story reflects the love between a Master and his slave,I believe it needs no words. However, I thank you for your criticism. As I work to improve my skill with the written word, I will forever remember your words as a reminder that excellency is defined not by others; but by he whom strives to attain it. Hopefully my next submission will slide more easily down your throat.

I do not mind criticism, I even look forward to it on occasion. However your rude words and holier-than-thou attitude were not only uncalled for but harsh in a way that suggests that you have never experienced the joy of a positive comment yourself. Life need not be a huge let down. Smile.

Wow, very nicely written - keeps you hooked from the start!

Look forward to reading more from you.

Well done I think, despite what others feel, It's Insightful and captivating. It draws you in, makes you feel like your being told a secret. Subtly teasing you, as if it say, you can know this, but will never have this. There is no reason erotica needs to be course or vulgar. There are 2 sides to everything for a reason. Thank you.

Great story, nice detail on feelings of the slave.

Keep writing. I thought this was really sexy and beautiful.

That was a very hot erotic story.

I love the detail you gave talking about how her ass was getting reamed.

I love anal, I love anal play, Especially enemas

Great example of intense and still caring. I do think, however, that she earned a bed for the night.

so hot!

A great story. Ignore that other anonymous asshole's comment, he (no question it's a he) is a twat.