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All Comments on 'A Slave's Tale: Auctioning Amelia'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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Try to read your story and also learn spell check

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Anon

Terrible grammar and spelling ruins a perfectly great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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terrible grammar and spelling

no1wvsteelerfanno1wvsteelerfanalmost 12 years ago
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Good story......very bad grammar ruined it. Sorry

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

I'm going to kill myself

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
LAZY WRITING AND SPELLING

Put a little effort into it. Get a dictionary—or a writing coach. This is childish stuff. Sorry.

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