All Comments on 'A Slice off a Cut Loaf Ch. 01-02'

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GRANGERGRANGERalmost 16 years ago
Great Beginning

Terrific story. If the remainder of the story is as good as this part; wow!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 10 years ago
Always fun to find a story hovering on the cusp of a hot rating at 4.49 !

Hope my full marksgive this tale a red splat of honer. The author did an excellent job switching narrative from male to female vantage point. Not many can.

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