All Comments on 'A Slow Descent Pt. 01'

Sorry to say but I saw this happening before I finished reading the first page. The chapter was well written but kind of predictable.

how long before all four are at their service

Pure crap.

I like the storyline and believe you can do alot to it. Ignore naysayers.

What the hell, this has possibilities. If drugs are involved, it sucks.

Typical BBC/white slut shit. Crawl back in your hole.

I hope you continue the story. I think it has great possibility.

Normally I remove racist comments but I think leaving your puerile scrawling is a better idea. That way anybody else who reads the comments can see you for the illiterate idiot you undoubtedly are.

and kinda silly *

...and knew I had to read your story and give some balanced input.

I rated it 5 and here's why:

I see a good background and setting established. Details build to your "slow descent " idea and her reactions mirror that. Any comments outside of this are puerile and unfounded. Except for a few possessives not done, there's maybe 2 very minor grammar errors in the whole thing. I can't see a reason why to say it's only worth 4, as you paid attention to detail, established your characters, set the stage and leave our main "heroine" rattled. The only thing missing is what exactly could have made both assistants crumble so fast, but that kind of mystery is perfectly acceptable. Well done, and I hope this level of quality continues. :)

1 star * for white slut wanna be a savage

Remember dear annony. It was after she fucked those 6 BBC and you filmed it and then cleaned her out. This story is fun and a good read. Gave it a 5

....loved it...especially the end when 10 reduced her to a submissive slut in front of the others.

catt...a white, sexually submissive 'Hot Wife' that loves rough sex and Black Men.

PS...my Husband sets it up, watches, and records how I love being used and abused just like the older woman did. I gave it 5 stars

kisses, catt

I thought this stuff only happened in my daydreams.