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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good Start

Ilike the start. Looking forward part 2 and 3.

Randy01Randy01almost 19 years ago
Nice begining

I like the way you take your time and start slowly, letting your characters develop. I Look forward to reading more of your work.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
Ditto for me cc delicious buildup!

I'd like to write some more inane but sincere compliments but I GOTTA find out how 2nd part goes.

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