All Comments on 'A Slow Seduction of Jasmine Pilcher Ch. 03'

Please continue this absolutly erotic and exciting fondling of this odd couple. I hope she eventually decides to go to bed with him and enjoy herself like she has wanted to do for a long long time.

It is amusing to come across an author whose main character is described in the tease as a chunky old gal melting snow and then find you have the ability to actually create a sensual story.

More of the writers here should emulate you. You deserve a 100 rating on talent, your enjoyment of writing and your characters name reminded me of the wonderful characters the great English author, Charles Dickens created. Perhaps Jasmine Pilcher will become a stereotype of the common woman so hot she melts snow lol.

Congrats.

I love the slow buildup and her vulnerability. Very arousing.