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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
your story

lOVED THE STORY, HURRY UP WITH THE REST.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It is really slow

You got us teased for so long. I think i can eat a horse and now you are giving us such a tiny morsel. The word "slow" not only applys to the seduction of Jasmine, but also the progress of your writing.

Keep it up man, we are all watching yours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago

Keep up the good work. Your submissions enhance the quality of this website.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
ASS?

WHEN IS HE GOING TO TAKE HER ASS?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent series

Great build up and detail. Nothing like screwing a fat middle aged bird...

EzrollinEzrollinalmost 6 years ago
I was slowly seduced...

I hesitated, did I really want to read a story of a fat woman's seduction? After the first paragraph I knew that I did... your writing style had seduced me. I really enjoy it when a writer let's you inside of the minds of the characters it's almost like living the story yourself! One of my rare five star ratings.

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