by thirstformisery
I really enjoyed your writing style and the setup to the story. I hope you write more! I would have loved to have more details at the end, to have it drawn out more.
I've had too many holidays like this. I never was lucky enough to find something to take away the coldness like Miranda. Maybe I'd not hate holidays so much if I had.
Hot & and really intense! More of Miranda’s slutty adventures please.
In addition to the William Burroughs influence, I also see some Charles Bukowski and a sho t (or two) of Tom Waits, for flavor. WONDERFULLY done!!! Please write more!!