All Comments on 'A Slut's Triangle Pt. 23'

Very good story. Glad to see Kryss got what was coming to him, but because of his actions throughout the story I can't help but think he deserves more. Or maybe, did Brenda do more, we just don't know about it?

That last sentence evokes much more than any description you could have written anout Kryss' ultimate take down by Brenda. It's so damned intense & perfect. We already know that Brenda is a masterful strapon artist so Thrusting his dry ass &leavingbit to ou r imagination is perfect. As usual, I'm eagerly awaiting the culmination to this story but honestly, I don't want it to end. After talking this year & a half journey with you, I'm going to have a really difficult & painful process of sayingbgoidbye to these characters.

CD, Kryss got what his ass deserved. The rest of the story will finish in an epilogue 🌹Stick around. Oh, and yeah, I’m attached to all the wonderful characters I have created.

Very good to see Kryss finally get his comeuppance and at the hands, or strap on, of a woman no less.

Yes,CD. The chapter, the last, was pretty intense. Kryss got more than he bargained for😎. I’m working on the epilogue and bonus chapter to tie up the loose ends.

StrangeT, I’m working on an Epilogue and Bonus chapter to expand the storyline beyond it’s limits - maybe it will clarify things a little more🌹

I like the edits you've done K! Very good.

Outstanding. The benchmark for excellence.