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All Comments on 'A Small Mistake, Big trouble'

by jerseyblue

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ramonbrookramonbrookabout 9 years ago
Really liked the story, but

Have to agree ..... WAY TOO SHORT! I like stories that you look forward to the next chapter, but you have have more substance to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good start

Well developed characters. Many women have changed their attitude, dress and behavior after hearing themselves referred to as a milf.

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesabout 9 years ago
I like where this is headed.

Nice job, good writing, interesting plot. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Looking forward

To chapter 2

21stcv21stcvabout 9 years ago
OOPS

Roll on chapter 2

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