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"Come for me, Anna!" Her dark hair was matted against her body.
"I want to feel you cum!" Anna looked towards her.
"I'm gonna cum! I'm gonna cum! I'm gonna-." She threw her head back as she came again. Delilah didn't stop as Anna thrashed wildly on the sofa.
"I'm gonna come too, baby! Make me cum!" Three more pumps was all she needed to reach her own peak. An orgasm so wild she collapsed onto the floor. She rode her own climax out using her fingers, inadvertently reaching another climax.
Flash!
Two weeks later a package came for Anna. The blond thanked the mailman and tore open the package. A thank-you card was sitting on top of the pile of photographs. "Thank you for the lovely time. Come by for another photoshoot soon! Love, D," it said. She riffled through the pictures of her first lesbian experience with a devious smile on her face. One picture, however, caught her attention. It was the one where she was fully nude for the first time. An imprint of Delilah's dark lipstick could be seen on her ass. So that's what I felt! She thought.
The photographs were carefully stored in an album and put away before she made a phone call.
"Hi, D. Can I come by tonight for another shoot?"
The end
...there was a little confusion, with me at least, over who was speaking since the dialogue order became confusing. At one point I felt that maybe the characters were talking in the third person (referring to themselves as though they were actually an additional person in the scene), since that was what made sense at that point.
Otherwise the story worked well. I was worried about the presence of the man, but he was handled well and added to the story by being someone in the background, rather than a threat to the flow. Please do not imagine that we need a follow up ti this story with these characters: do not guild the lily, try for something different instead.