All Comments on 'A Snippet from a Threesome'

The exceeds perhaps my own most erotic MFM fantasy. Thank you for sharing this gem. :)

Don't start with sex. Give us the setting, background, who, what, when.

You "engulf" a cock with your mouth NOT "engorge" it...not to mention examining the beauty of said cock whilst it's heading down your throat? Good potential for sure! Nice adjectives in play but you need work(maybe just experience) on the when and where to use them.

I like some background about the participants, physical description and how they come to be in a three, not just how they come in a three!

The mention of vaginal dp, yum!

Definitely made me drip

Well written and hot as hell. 5 stars for you.